This is our final cut. However I still do not feel that the first bit is very clear that it is a flashback. I think the parts that need to be changed is the part where the 'doll' flickers from black and white to colour. I think it needs to be a quicker pace to ensure it confuses the audience. I also think the part with the hand needs to be altered because the idea is for it to make the audience feel disorientated however I am not sure it does. I really like how it has turned out after 1.02 minutes. I think that if I were to do it again, I would possibly cut the parts before and start from that point and then film some of the '8 hours after'.
February 17th Much improved work on this blog with a wider range of presentation methods. Just a couple of things which really could do with tightening up on - can you get the post titles horizontal? and please go through and spell check your text including capital letters for the words of film titles! Continue trying to upload the video for Question 7 too.
February 17th
ReplyDeleteMuch improved work on this blog with a wider range of presentation methods. Just a couple of things which really could do with tightening up on - can you get the post titles horizontal? and please go through and spell check your text including capital letters for the words of film titles!
Continue trying to upload the video for Question 7 too.