Change of plan

This is the rough cut of our opening sequence. However from here we have decided to start another opening because we do not think this is very good. The filming was not very steady, the dialogue was very hard to hear and we would have had to change the music as we did not make it. I feel this is a risky thing to do however I think we could potentially get it done by the deadline. We will not have as much time to film and edit etc but I feel we will come out with a much better opening and truly show our skills. We did not finish it as we did not add in the title or any of the production names etc. I think the worst part was towards the end, with the doll and the fire. A lot of our feedback had said it was not very easy to wok out the storyline. Another point is that it was not clear we were at a funeral because of the clothing worn. I felt that it looked a little too much like a trailer instead of an opening so we will keep that in mind for our other idea. I think we are making the right decision to re think our idea.